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It Was Nice Knowing You...Part 1

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"The semifinals will start with the two who will start first which will be, Kayaa Uchiha of The hidden Sand and Kukankagaur of The hidden Stone Village."said a Leaf joinin and signaled Kayaa and Kukankagaru come to the battle field.

"Well...good luck to you both."said the third Hokage,"Give it your all." then he left to go back to his place next to the Kazekage. Then Kayaa and Kukankagaru when to the battle field. 'There is something fishy about this girl...' thought Kayaa, 'why dose she have a tail and ears? But either way...this is going to be interesting.' 'Kayaa Uchiha huh? She is a tough opponent judging by her appearance...' thought Kukankagaru,'I need to give it my all!'

"Are you girls ready?" the ninja jonin asked. "Yeah." responded Kayaa. "Yup." responded Kukankguare. "Alright then..." he said,"start!"

"Fire Style:Fireball Jutsu!" Kayaa said and a fireball came out when she blew air out. "Hehe, nice try but, Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu!" Kukankagaru said. It extinguished Kayaa's fireball. "Wind Style: Great Breakthrough Jutsu!" Kukankagaru said and the jutsu blew Kayaa back and she made a creator on the wall. "How can she use such a powerful move?!?" Kayaa questioned, "But lucky I have something up my sleeves too. Lightning Style: Emotion Wave!" "I can't deflect that it has both water and lightning!"said Kukankagaru, "I can only doge it."so she hid behind a nearby tree. "I got you now!" Kayaa said while coming out of the tree's truck and grabbing Kukankagaru by the neck. "Ahhh!" Kukankagaru yelled and spared/farted (whichever one you want to say), the area was filled with a horrible smell. Kayaa evacuated the area and went to the farthest area in the arena. "Oh my god that smells so bad!" Kayaa yelled by also laughed at the same time. "Kayaa get a hold of yourself!" Tashiro said. "Yeah! You know you can beat her just get over with it already!" Kaza yelled. But that got Kayaa mad. "Shit up! I know I can!"yelled Kayaa, "But if I finish it now there's a good chance that I might kill her and I don't want to kill anyone!" "Does it look like we care?!?"they both said at the same time. Kayaa got really mad and threw two shurikens at them. "I said shit up!!!!" Kayaa snapped back at them.

 "Come on, Kukankagaru!" Deidara yelled, "You can win this battle! I know you can!" 'Deidara...'Kukankagaru thought,'right.' She nodded and took advantage of Kayaa arguing with her teammates. "Wind Style: Air Bullets!" And it sent Kayaa to the wall and she made another creator and that got her even more mad. "Ohhh!" Kayaa said sarcastically,"You just made me a million times more mad..." then she turned pitch black and all you could see was the outline of her hair and her eyes that were turned pure white and so did her mouth, her mouth on the other hand had a smile that said,'I'm going to kill you and it's going to be fun'. That sent shivers down everyone's spine, and Kukankagaru farted (I'm just going to say that because I don't know what to say XD) but this time Kayaa wasn't affected by it because her nose disappeared, all you could see was Kayaa's eyes, freaky grin and the word "cry" (泣 or naku) on her neck. Then Kayaa tries to attack but hesitated for some odd reason, which gave Kukankagaru a chance to attack, "Water Style: Raging Waves!" It hit Kayaa and she got hurt so badly that she could barley get back up.     "You...don't...know...what you...are getting...yourself into..." Kayaa said while panting,"just give...up while...you still...have...the....chance." "I'm not going to...give up until...you do..."Kukankagaru said panting as well for using so much chakra in the last attack. "You...I was...just trying...to warn you..." Kayaa said still panting,"I'm sorry...please forgive me..." "What are you talking about?" Kukankagaru asked. "I'm talking about this..." Kayaa responded, "Demonology Style: Demon Black Flare Jutsu..." Kayaa covered the arena in her black shadow and nobody saw what happened but Kayaa.

She then released the black smog back into her body and while this was happening she was yelling in pain and Kukankagaru was trying to get back up and painfully managed to. "I.....warned you.....I'm sorry....but I don't......know if you......are going to......make it." Kayaa managed to say. "I am.....because I'm taking.....you down with.....me." Kukankagaru said now grabbing a kuni from her bag and started to charge at Kayaa. But Kayaa tried to dodge it but ended up getting sliced on her right eye. "Ughhhhh!" Kayaa yelled in pain while holding her right eye. Her demon side started to come back and out of being scared Kukankagaur farted. "You just made the biggest mistake of your life." Kayaa said but her voice was a lot deeper and was really scary. She put her hand put to attack Kukankagaur,her nails were now claws, but she was stopped by something. She looked over her shoulder and saw chakra strings attached to her and her hand. She looked back at Kukankagaur and saw Deidara and a Jonin in front of her, while Sasori came behind Kayaa and tried to calm her down and lucky he did. "Kayaa Uchiha that's enough!"said the Leaf Jonin. "Fine."Kayaa responded,"You know what? I quit....Kukankagaur you win..." "It's too late for that though..."Sasori stated. "What do you mean?" Kayaa asked. "We interfered, in order to save Kukankagaur."he responded,"we interfered for her not you, Kayaa. Which means you win." "But...I quit." Kayaa said. "It doesn't matter. We interfered first, before you quit."he said," You won. Congratulations, but we should first take you to the hospital for your eye. May I?" "Yes you may but be back here for your battle." The Jonin responded. "Right." Sasori responded. He carried Kayaa bridal style and headed for the hospital.

"Kukankagaur, are you okay?" Deidara asked. "Yeah. I'm just tired." Kukankagaur responded. "You don't look to well." Deidara said."What do you mean?" Kukankagaur asked. "You're looking a bit pale. I think you should go to the hospital too." Deidara said,"Can I go leaver her at the hospital too?" "Yes you may."stated the Jonin. Deidara took Kukankagaur bridal style as well and headed for the hospital as well.


Hey I finally finished the first part of the story. I don't know how long this story will be but I hope it will be interesting and enjoyable. I hope you guys like this story so far. I'm not a good writer but I will try to make it entertaining to you. I don't know how often I will be able to write but I hope you can be patient with me.

I don't own any Naruto and Kukankagaur is not my OC but is Ki-Akushu-Bakudan's I only own Kayaa Uchiha.
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Denakari's avatar
That was cool :) 
It's interesting to see their powers and jutsus. You got me! I've many questions now XD I'll be waiting for part 2

About the narration, as a constructive critique, I suggest you to try to not repeat the same word too often. You can use synonyms :) like for ex. "The semifinals will start with the two who will start first which will be..."  you can try "The semifinals will begin with the two who will start first which will be..." ;)

I believe this story has protencial and I hope to read more soon! ^^